The lOvE of my LiFe**

by BehindThisSmilex   Mar 14, 2006


He is the love of my life
who kept me away from this knife
he put up the strife
kept me from taking my life--
he is the only one who will understand
when I'm sinking beneath the sand
he grabs my hand
and pulls me back onto land--
when he is around
i block out all i surround
as we lay on the ground
and listen to our hearts pound--
he listens to the sound of my tears
falling when i have fears
i don't care about my peers
or any of these past years--
i just want to lay on his arms
and watch the world go by
because he is the love of my life
and i could never love anyone
as much as i love him

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  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    I love this poem of yours =) its so well written, also amazing rhyme scheme and well chosen title lol but the only thing that was "bad" in this poem is that u used life twice to rhyme but for the rest good job ...5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by Ambar K

    Magnificent the only word to describe this!
    I mean its Great poem! Checkout my poems if you get a change.

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