Beautifully written...full of passion and desire, a touch of sadness and hint of hope...a wonderful recipe for a poem. Great job!

Omg..most likely the best love poem i have ever read..especially because i can relate so much right now:S=(
this was amazing..great writing, awesome metaphors and similies.
The only mistake:
"But now you're are forever gone"-you're are--you're

As i was reading through that i felt so helpless..the love you describe, like the pain feels so true.
I hope you are ok. You are an amzing writer..dont ever stop.

much love
xoxo

Amazzing..what imagery and passion...WOW thats all i have..keep it up! God bless xoxo

Lisssa

This is a very sweet and touching poem... very well written I gave it a 5 of course... great job!!!

::MELI::

Ohhh dear! that was amazing...beautiful......nice words...5/5

luv,
Bharti

God, that was so great! You poured so much into this poem. Its real and true. What a great write. I'll be keeping up with you and your poetry. I'd love to read more! 5/5

Always,
-Brittany

Sweety, you have created a masterpiece here. I was blown away by this. I live this poem of yours everyday, so I know what its like. Absolutely magnificent. Keep it up. :-)

Awwwww! I'm gonna cry. This is too sweet! So beautiful!!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

Good job

Wow, this was really an amazing poem indeed, just loved the way u xpressed ur feelings here.

all the best and take care
5/5

Hey darling beautifully written. a t0uching p0em. very well written. great j0b. thank u heapz f0r ur kind w0rds 0n my p0em.. they really meant al0t t0 me! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Wonderful poem i loved it so much keep up the great work!!!

Okay u know wut, this poem was really amazing.
well written, beautifully expressed and everything!!!!!!!!!
I totally luved the way you wrote it and how it came straight from ur heart
keep up the good work
good luck
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

So heartfelt penned, yet beautiful emotions....