Wow this poem really grabbed me form the beginning to the end, what a masterpiece...I loved it!!! but hunn it breaks my heart to know that you are in pain, I would take it away if I could...I beg of you please be strong, I know how hard it is, but you have to!!! I am here whenever you need to talk or a shoulder to cry on...

Much Love Sabrina

Great job dear........
so heartfelt and sad........u deserve 5/5

bharti

An amazing poem, so much feeling and a pain I can understand very well

I know the feeling, and i know it really sucks and you just want it to end, but you gotta stick through it! And don't worry- you will always have a friend in me, and a ton of other people on this site. love ya! ~Lex

A deep and p0werful p0em darl

Aww i l0ve this poem 2!! g0d ur so tALENTed babe!! im always here 4 u, no that, i no ur going thru a l0t but h0ld on babe nd keep ya head up high

Wow, this is really an amazing poem, loved it for sure.

all the best and take care

Omg that was really strong!!!
I hope u r doin' well
keep it up and always remember that good ppl r still here for you*like that best friend of urs..maddy I think* anyway am also here for ya ;)
Much Lov
NemO x0x0x0x0x0

Woho! Wonderful!!!!!! So impressive. Your poems keep overwhelming me. They are so dam good. I really loved it.

Sweety something completely off topic now. You said you mailed me. I'm so sorry about that. It is just something I found out recently;
Somehow the private messeges I get go to the "unappreciate email box -thing" ... Usually adverts and annoying emails go there, but somehow also the private messeges.

And I never check that box. But now that I found out I'm keeping an eye on it. So emails won't go unnoticed. Cause that thing deletes the emails in 5 days automatically.

ANyway, I think I solved the problem and as I said I'm also keeping an eye on that box thing.

So I'm so sorry that your emails are gone =(( SO sorry... But it won't ever happen again, I promise =)

Also another thing, I always forget to say it, and I think of it every time I see your picture. "these are my words, that I never said before" I'm not sure if it's from that beautiful song "so for away"

* I don't know where the rest of this messege went?... "

Anyway.. I love that song..

Lotsaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

AWSOME POEM

Wow i loved it it was so powerful and had strong meaning keep it up like always always, Carly

Meaning, structure, clarity through all that is unclear, depth, it would really upset me to read something so heart felt, if i wasn't on antidepressants! I hate life, but your poems are great! 5/5
Helen

Deep. It's a excellent poem. you are an excellent writer i like the poem. 5/5
-Vino

Very deep. This deserves a 5/5.

Heys...
I'm just a newbie here lol...my friend has a couple of great poems and I love writing em myself so I decided to make an account oh here.
Anyway, I was reading this poem of yours and it blew me away.
It's a great poem and it's poems like these that inspire me to write them myself.
Well, i better go.
Good luck with the rest of your poems.
sHaNz x0x..mwarks...x0x

Very nicely done! I love it!!!

So much hurt and pain wrapped around every word of this poem. Its just too sad. Great work once again. Loved reading it.

That was a excellent poem, i love it!

That was really good. i liked it alot. you shoudl like go look andcomment some of mine. there not as good, but maybe they will be someday! k

-tiffany