Comments : Beneath The Once Barren Ground

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem loved it 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow! That's what I love about art, much like poetry it is so subjective.
    This is a beautifully heartbreaking piece with a ray of hope at the end. Very nice.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wonderfully done... You've captured the life of the picture well!!

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Its amazing how you described the art through poem .Meaning is very deep and touching .Good job.

    --chavii--

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    This is such a wonderfully written poem. I read it first then looked at the picture. At frist when i read it I serisouly thought it was about war. I'm just studying for my history test maybe thats why. But I felt that it related perfectly. Then I saw the picture and read the poem again and i've gotta say, I luv it. Its amazing how just from a piece of art you interrurperated into such a meaning poem. Wonderfully done! 5/5

    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Luanne
    Heartbreaking but beautifully written...truly enjoyed this one,.
    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Heartbreaking write but has the feeling of hope for a brighter future. Beautifully written....