Wow i lyked dis....lvoe dia mwaz xoxo

Hey...i liked dis poem...it realli sends across a message...good work 5/5 XoX

Hehe, it finally worked! I told you I would get to read and comment your poem. lol. Anyway, that's really good. I never actually expected something like that from the title - but I was pleasantly surprised. It's pretty sad, but such a good read. Nice job! :)

I liked the expresive words in this poem. It helps you imagine what the scene would look like. Great job.