Cool. Under pressure AND sleep deprived?
1) Poor you. *hugs*
2) Rocks anyways.

Lv A, xxx ;)

Heyy,
Haha, love the poem Hun. Sleep deprived? Haha, its still good, better than what I could do being awake:P
Monique

I absolutely love yours! i love the concept of taking pills to create the illusion and escaping reality!! very original. keep it up!
-xXx-

Really great poem huni, i l0ved it...i l0ve y0o nd miss y0o s0 much

It's great even if it's not your best, who puts you under pressure to write poems? Weird! Well, it flowed really well, and it was very true, and not superficial, i liked it! 5/5
Helen

HellO dear
u r so talented(its not like I jinx or sth)lol I loved this poem so much. esp when it comes to my mood ryt now!!!
keep it up hunni. hope u'll win the competition!
Lov
NemO x0x0x0x0

Wow I truly loved this poem! It's brilliant sweety. How can you say it's not great! I think it's fantastic!!!

I heard about your lil club fishing bowl, just too bad I recently joined a club, just above your ghehe Silhouette. I'm assitant aswell hahha.
I'm so sorry hun. I had gladly joined your club =*( Now we are seprated! That's not fair! =*( hehe

Oh well =) As long as I can read your poems, I'll live and be happy hahha

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Ps; sing along! "And I don't want the world to seeeeee me, cause I don't think that they'd understand.. when everything feeeeeels like the movies, ye you bleed just to know you're alive.."

Dam I really think we love the same kind of music =)

The title is Brilliant! and the poem has a realistic, could be applied to millions (sadly), depth and insight.

Very good anna

I loved it! that was such an incredible poem, and the fact that u weren't in the best of situations when u wrote it makes it even more amazing! :) keep up the masterpieces!lots of luv xxxxx

Somewhy it is when U say that the poem is not your best, that it really exceeds all expectations. Very good work.
Tim
PS: still thing U are g*** l******

Wow, this is superb, u really wrote great facts here, very nice theme behind every line.

all the best and take care
5/5

Hun i loved it like always *hugs and mmuuaahh a kiss for you keep it up 5/5

That was nicely written! gr8 job

Bharti

Ooo love it

For you, not best but for me, its best. sometimes when we wake up, we think something and that is i feel now so, its good. nice poem. you're really a good poet.
Right?

I like your poem very much! i keep on reading on it again because its very awesome!
keep on writing. good poem! i realize myself that i was like that sometimes...but its just an illusion; very nice!