No one knew his pain

by physco   Mar 20, 2006


No one knew his pain,
The pain he held inside,
No one felt the tears,
All the tears he cried.

He was invisable to the world,
They all thought he was fine,
But what they didnt know was,
He\'d had enough this time.

They didnt know that he,
He went home and he bled,
They didnt know that he,
Took to heart the things they said.

Yes, They all thought he was fine,
Thought he let their comments slip,
They really did not know,
He was slowly loosing grip.

They were turning him against,
Yes,
Against himself,
They made him feel the need to die,
And then he needed help.

Oh he was far away from fine,
He was on the edge of life,
But i thank him so very much,
For he still put down that knife.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow the ending was surprising

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    For some reason...I feel like I know Ashley. You've written so much about him and I can tell you love him with everything you have. It seems he's had a rough time, but I'm glad you two found each other and help each other get through everything without hurting yourself.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    Awww really good poem. i hope you can help him. keep writing xxx