Song of Death.

by Brittney Follett   Mar 21, 2006


I can hear you,
You're laughing too loud
I want to kill you.
You're up in those clouds

I wish you could fix me
But now you're dead
I'm all alone now.
Just stay out of my head

I blame you
for all the lies
its your own fault
that you died

It's all your fault
You are going to hell
You're the one
who made me fail

i hate you
i hate my life
let me end this
give me the knife

do you like it
when i cry?
do you wish
that i would die?

I'm going now
I'm sealing my fate
I'm doing what you want
I walk through Hell's gate

I slice my writes
it stings at first
I try to quench
Satan's Thirst

My blood he craves
its all his now
I won't have a grave
Just this vow

When I get
my demon wings
I'll write a song,
For you I'll sing.

Its a song of death
my solo to hell
It's called "I Love You"
Does that ring a bell?

You said that to me
When he killed you
You deserved it
You lied to me too

You told me that
you would never leave me
but I promise now
I will kill you when I'm free

The gates are open
Satan awaits
he has come
to seal my fate

I bow to him
I ask for my wings
He flicks his wrist
Now I am to Sing

I crawl out of hell
my wings afire
I'm wandering this world
for you, I desire.

I see you now
sitting upon that cloud
You're Laughing again
I don't make a sound

You're going to hell
You're not getting wings
I clear my throat
I start to sing:

"I want revenge
You're going to die
the reason is
you made an angel cry.

"That angel was me.
You tore me apart
Now I'm here
To rip out your heart.

"The gates of hell
Are calling your name
You're not laughing.
You've realized this is no game.

"This is my song
I sing it for you
I hate you now
If you didn't get the clue."

I tear out his heart
he won't need it
I rip it apart
crushing every bit

I've song my song
my revenge gone
I'm happy now
It's been too long.

I write my feelings
through this pen
understand the meanings
of my world within.

Copyright Brittney Follett

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  • 16 years ago

    by NightKeeper

    This is awesome. I've put some of your poems on my fav list and I'm adding you to my fav authors. Aside from some grammer mistakes its very well written. For some reason, to me, some parts don't flow that well... But I like the feeling it gave me when I was reading it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth

    This was a really good poem but ... in the beginning you talk about clouds & in the second stanza hell... kinda contradicting ... but still a very good poem ... well writtin!

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    This has by far got to be one of the best poems i've read on this site, totally kept my attention from start to finish. great poem a definate 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow, wow wow!
    I loved this!
    I thought the stanza
    '' wish you could fix me
    But now you're dead
    now I'm all alone
    Just stay out of my head''

    would flow better with
    But now you are dead
    now I am all alone.
    Just stay out of my head.

    ''I doing what you want
    I walk through Hell's gate''

    Should be 'I'm doing what you want''

    Apart from that, I think this was absolutely perfect.

    My favourite stanza was

    ''Its a song of death
    my solo to hell
    It's called "I Love You"
    Does that ring a bell?''

    I thought that was really powerful and hard hitting.

    The imagery and wording were a pleasure to read.
    This has to be one of my favourites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    You reall know how to write dark poems... The imagination was very good... I loved the ending as well... it was amazing...

    keep writting always...

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