Contridictions

by PS   Mar 21, 2006


You're the guy with a face dressed in blush
with dirt eye shadow and coal black liner
those blue eyes nervous to go on
and perform a show for everyone
some times you see me and others your don't
you don't talk to me but sometimes you do.
my mind is twisting and turning
turning about.
loving and hating you
for all the good and the bad.
sometimes i love you and others i don't
you are too funny and too much of a jerk
so tell me now, if you can talk
why do you see me and not really look
why do you say things but not really speak.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Breath of fresh air. I love this poem, right now this is so relevant to me. Nice way of getting it across...

    "my mind is twisting and turning
    turning about.
    loving and hating you
    for all the good and the bad. "

    Great stuff...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Firstly the title works, thats a really good thing. Then I like the contradictions in themselves and the way it was written. I thought it was excellent. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    GOod, you are asking the right questions... this may be a burden to you and concerned.. be that but, dont worry your worries!...

    may I ask you to ready one of my poems it is called "communication verses worries"

    I hope this will give you some imput.. that will help you if not anyone else.. Good work on expressing yourself..

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