Hey this is really very nicely penned poem, though its full of sadness but then darkness is part of life so y to feel pity on it. u really xpressed everything nicely.

all the best and stay strong
take care

Wow this poem really has a lot of feeling in it I think this might help explain to alot of peopel what your going through I see the saem thing in the mirror as you do and yet everyone tells me im skinney and have a great body and blah blah blah we just don't believe it, I can really relate to what your saying, great poem

lots of love
*~*becky*~*

Like always u are very good at writting your feelings but this poem makes me sad. if u ever need a shoulder to lean on or someone to talk to im always here:) we all have our problems inside.....so y not have someone fighting some of the same demons help your through your pain?:)

My insides, inside out...that was such a poweful statement. i love how you write so well with your feelings. and thanks for the comments. you know i dont know you, but for what it takes, you can lean on me in someway. keep the poems coming, i need something to look forward to reading..love it all..
-whitney-

Oh sweetie.....
i like your poem but theres just something about it..... i dont no.... i can feel your pain when i read the words..... and sweetie one thing i live by is that its good to be and look different bcoz if we was all the same this world and the lives we live would suck so much more ass.... but anyways hun..... good poem and thanx for checkin mine out.....

Crystal...

I love it, it really makes you feel.
and i have a new poem called My Dark Valentine, please rate and comment. thanks. :)

Beautifuly wirtten, i know the pain your going through hun

take care x0x0

:( you can really express yourself through your poems, and I know you will touch many people with this, because for some reason, most girls do go through that

-kelsie

Hey. i know exactly what this is like.. BLECH.. which right now i feel like im bloating out of my pajamas.. i think its all the fluid in me or something.. anyways.. back to you. lol. awesome writing.. and keep it up.. im here if you ever need to talk
ps - thanks for the comment
xxx

Aww this is so sad, but i feel ur pain sweeti

Awww its soo sad :(( and so many girls do this they dont realise that theres always a guy who would die for her just to see her happy :(( soo sad but i loved the poem :)