Heaven... (Rictameter)

Heaven...

Heaven,
It's like Heaven,
The rapture, of your love,
Nothing matches, its rhapsody,
Such splendor, is the ecstasy, of you.
I'm uplifted, by your presence.
Great joy, extols, my soul,
When I'm, in your,
Heaven...

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

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Rictameter: Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2,4,6,8,10 Then down again, 8,6,4,2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.

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This Poem was written as a challenge entry to the yos sponsored Romantic Poetry Forms and Style Challenge; http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=44046