Hey ur poem is excellent and it reflects me in so many ways.
at the end of it you said "still working on it" dont change it a bit a poems comes from your heart from your soul it shows how you feel the the words on the page you should never change cause when you change them the poem turns fake
but great job keep it up
love cassie144
xoxo

I love it. Really good work, you shouldn't change it a bit.

A very touching poem. True words. Nice work..

Aww thnx everyone. Miss you heaps to Krista!

I like it...this expresses your emotions well.

It does express your feelings
and i also think you shouldnt change it
this poem is who you are your thoughts your smiles and your tears

ou are a premo wrighter keep poems like this going !!!

lana

The best poems makeyou see things in yourself even when they are written by someone else, thanks for the insight Elise

Awesome poem.. odn't change or alter it.. it's emotional that i can relate to
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