I am disturbed.....very....disturbed....but hey...keep being you...no one else can do it better....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I concure with Visions, it was pretty funny. I cant see any seriously evil and twisted sentsations in this poem, put you get points, you made me laugh today. 5/5 for putting a smile on face

Haha, This was awesome!! :D I loved it lol. It put a smile on my face =]

luv natalie x-x

LOL
loved the sadistic laugh at the end lol
5/5

~StefQ

I love this poem! It reminds me of me and my friend

Oh dear. Shall I ring the mental institutuion or do you want to?? No, really . . .I suppose it is a funny poem, and in those terms it's a good poem lol. And you're my friend, so I can't exactly say its a load of rubbish can I??? 5/5

Peace. [Sole]

OK . . . THIS IS WEIRD

A funny little write. It really scared me and makes me think I don't want to get on the wrong side of you...because I cannot hide. Different and funny, well done.

Lol, nice, so maniacal, that will give me nightmares now, but seriously I liked your use of humour.

LOL...very funny poem...I like your choice of words. I really wasn't expecting it to be like that, but I was glad that I read it. Definitely funny enough to be in the "funny" section of the site! good job 5/5

Wow that was great...another great poem
keep up the good work!!
xoxoxo
cler

Funnyyy :)

"Fore no-one know does know" this was a little hard sentence. And when you write a poem you should make it flow better. The whole idea behind the poem is pretty good. But you could make it better.

All the exclaminations are a little too much. And the big letters combined with the exclamations are just too much. You can make it strong with just one of them. With both it just gets a little too much.

So, If you work on that it would probably become a really good poem. ^_^ Hope this helped you.

*BrokenToy

This poem is so cool!!! and very funny, I don't think I'd want to get on the wrong side of you though, lol.

Maybe you should have entitled the poem But You Cannot?

HaHaHa I enjoyed this poem ALOT! For some reason I'm a big fan of threatening poetry! Awesome job! 5/5

HEHEHEHEHE..
Thats a very well written poem
haha its sooo funny :P
its great
keep up the gooood work

Haha, that's a bit scary, no? It's funny... it actually made me laugh out loud. Good one

~ Tina

Hi jenny u mad biatch nice poems
chloe !

OMG MY nams Jenny. WOOOTT