Well Done.
Great Write.. It's Another Great Poem.

I love this, Darien! The images were so beautiful, made me long for summer.. Absolutely breathtaking, awesome poem! ;)

So beautiful! Those moments in summer that we miss so much... Gracefully written!

Beautiful Darien. Summer memories are the very best I have. The summer will always have a special plae in my heart, nothing can compare to those friends lol beautiful capturing of the sentiment, made me miss a lot of things ^_^

Nice write.......nice words.....

Aaaaahhhh yes, those summer days, I remember them well!!!! Beautifully written..... loved it.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)

Yes, summer is such a wonderful thing! And it's finally here! I love the way you described it on here being your "best friend". I loved it, and it made me really glad that summer is here!

This was cool, It reminded me of when I was little, Well like 13, and I used to always go to the beach and stuff. I just wish it was summer nowwww, Cause it's so cold, Lol.

But, It was a awesome poem. The second stanza was awesome. Cause soccer rocks!! Tehe 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

I really love your nature descriptions here, but if you don't mind I have one tiny suggestion:
Soccer fields with freshly cut grass,
[Maybe this would read better as:
Soccer fields with grass freshly cut,]

I love this poem! great work! I agree w/Talee, I love soccer too, so the second stanza does rock! Total soccer fan! anywayz, beautiful, 5/5

"and pool of clear and clear water."
I'd either say 'a pool' or 'pools'
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"I miss out secrets and sounds,"
'our'?
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I kept feeling like the stanzas were supposed to have a rhyme scheme of ABCB, but that is just my fault from reading too many poem recently. I liked the details and imagery (I'm really all about details and imagery, I love that stuff).

I actually gave you a four on this one I just don't hink that it was as good as all of your others. It did not seem to flow as well and it did not really ryhme anywhere.

-please don't hate me

I love all of the details and imagery you used in this one! I think it's one everybody can relater to...great job once again!

Beautiful! It was very well written. I loved all the descriptions and details. The imagery was great. I love summer too! Great job! Keep it up!

Well i hate summerrrrr...but i loved this poem, you make the reader see summer in a different aspect then i normally would!!! Great job

If not for the direct references to summer in the first and last two stanzass, it could be a person you were talking about. i asume that is your aim

a new spin on a love for summer. very well written

Ruby