Untitled (suggestions welcome)

by Temptation   Mar 25, 2006


Darkness comes now, clouds my mind
Visions long gone, forgotten soon
I hear a voice, I know it's mine
Confusion & nothing all around
These words I've heard many a time
Can't move there's no space, no room
It's the killer lie , the words "I'm fine"
I don't understand, lost, then I hit the ground!

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  • 17 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Great job! i liked it alot

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim Slotnick

    Great and fantastical! ^_^ Keep on writen', you are good! hehehe.

  • 18 years ago

    by blu

    Wow, that was intense... unique, but in a good way! I like! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by vicky

    Killer lie 'im fine' i no hun i no. ultimate lie that i fink every has told atleast once.some more. x.x.x

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