For when push came to shove...

by Tripp   Mar 26, 2006


Wow, I've just been churning out the sad poems lately...as usual, vote and especially comment ;-)

Just myself and from my friends their love

always been there for me when push came to shove

When the popular kids would point, laugh and sneer

my soul has been torn in half, my breaking point is near

the point of no return, i hope they soon learn

not everyone is the same, even if they might appear lame

one boys life, is not everyones game

he breaks down, falls to the floor,

his face locked in an eternal frown,

from always being pushed and dropped down

his heart has been cut out

without even the will to shout

scream

or resist anymore

not one more object for him to lean

the doorway to eternal peace has been thrown open

not once looking back, he leaves this world,

to be seen and loved never again...

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow did he kid die..i mean u said "not once looking back, he leaves this world to be seen and never loved again." wow as i rewrote thta httas kind of intense..he left but only to come back stronger and better than ever....INTENSE MAN lol

    lataz lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Again, the structure is poor (I have to be honest) But the poem is good. If you could just re-arrange the poem in a more suitable style, the actual poem would become less labourious to read. The rhyming was good, but faltered a little at times.

    Peace. [Sole]