My apology

by Sorefromreality   Mar 26, 2006


Ur so stubborn
Ur not coming back
b/c obviously courtesy
u evidently lack

no one to hold me
when I'm on the edge
no one to catch me
when i fall of the ledge

u don't ever apologize
or look me in the eyes
i always make the first move
so our friendship can be smoothed

I'm sorry that i can't be perfect
and this apology i will regret
but for once I'm being sincere when i say
I'm sorry we ever met

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    OoOoo..short but sweet i give u a five and mean it! bravo! it kept perfect rhythem and has a bit of a bite to it as i like to put it. in the line
    when i fall of the ledge
    i'd edit it and make of OFF the ledge.
    i'm a dork and catch these things...
    well anyways i really did like this one. these r the kind of things that get very high ratings. now if u can make a longer one and pull off the rhyming perfectly like u did with this one then u would be getting very good. and as you can see in some of my poems i tend to break the rhythem but hey ppl still love them and u still read them. well c ya latter my most frequent reader.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I loveee this poem. i can relate to it soo much. great work. keep it up. and thanks for your comment :) love ya, tammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    I luv it, i luv it, i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! okay, so yeah, im still going out with dj. i luv him...luv ya hun, keep writing. Hey, should we see a movie or go to BC Sound on Saturday?
    Luv Ya Lots
    RayRay

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    A little rough at parts, but this thing is gushing emotion. whoever you wrote this for, i hope that it gets better in between you two soon.