Am I in love?

by BrokenToy   Mar 27, 2006


As I watch him walk by
a smile on his face
My heart skips a beat
my heart is complete

He looks at me
with those gorgeous blue
My legs gives in
my mind wants to sin

He walks by me
his hand brushes mine
My body freeze
my eyes cannot see

He disappear from my sight
he is gone for now
My body still quivers
my hand still shivers

Am I in love?
Who knows...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Georgia

    Boy have you got yourself a guy! A guy that romantic is like one in a million, congrats my friend. As to whether you love him or not, that depends if you know him or not. How long have you known him? If you've never talked i think you're just feeling alot of physical attraction, personally, I think love at first sight is a load of bull.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    I love the 3rd and 4th line!

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This is great simple but effective i know how that feels and youve expressed it well great job xx ALLY xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    You definitely sound in love to me

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    "my mind wants to sin" great line
    I love the short lines for this poem, makes the point much clearer
    Well done :)

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