See life as...

by Jerbear   Mar 27, 2006


Kids see life as...
"I want Ice cream now!"
but video games ARE life!!
I can't wait to get my period!
I hate you mom, just @#$%die!

Teens see life as...
a pain to go to school
brothers suck, kill them all!
What is life useful for?
fit in... or else!

Adults see life as...
Kids are great (from a distance)
bills, go to hell....o, children!
"pumkin, drugs?" where can I get some?
work, sleep, make dinner, work...

Cancer patients see life as...
beautiful, can't get enough!
use it while you got it!
love is painful, but worth it!
a chance to go to school again? GREAT!!!

It's kinda sad but who would you rather be???

*please comment, and vote I would really like to know how you feel 'bout this poem! should I toss it? or keep it!

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  • 17 years ago

    by McGeek

    That is one of the greatest poems i have ever read..and it's soo true..i give you a 5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelssღ

    This is a super good poem!!=)...Keep writing...you have a talent!=)...Check out some of my stuff!=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    I like this poem and u shouldnt toss any poem that u write cuz if it came from u u should love it no matter wat any one says in my opinion this poem is wat u think and thats great

  • 17 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Wow.. This is actually a great poem, very well written and very unique, I usually read poems that ryhme, but this is still great.

  • 17 years ago

    by *~*Samantha*~*

    You have an amazing way of putting your words together the way you do and getting straight to the point....DO NOT toss this poem out...keep it!! You are honestly right, too many people take life itself for granted.....Keep up the Great work girl....you really have something going for you in your future!!

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