This is so wonderfully written, I like the hospital imagery and the conflict of life within death. Great length and rhyme.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wonderful write... sad and meaningful! Beautifully done!

Your poetry gives me the chills. People will tell me I'm talented at this...and I can tell they've never read any of your poems. I could never hold a candle to your words!

Aww *hugs* I hope your mom gets better Nikki. take care XXXXX

Hey gorgeous! First of all, thank you for that touching comment you left for me, you made a wonderful end to a very crappy day. (Does that make any sense, lol.)

Awww sweetie, this poem was sad. What's wrong with your mother that has caused her to be hospitalized for so long? That was a heartfelt dedication to a person who has ovbiously had a powerful impact on your life as all mothers should. I hope things work out with her, it is so hard to loose family. Keep strong hun, for you and for your mother. Huggles!

-Tainted

She Has a Rare Disease Along With Two Others :( But She Is Doing Ok And She Has Alot Of Hard Prayers Walking With Her Through This Journey xoxo-Nikki-xoxo