Hey this is a beautiful poem, this is so true..i just can't believe that you have observed all this and you hv done a magnificient work here, i think now i have answers to give for why i drink...lol..lol

beautifully xpressed here, and i know this is all so true...i know

all the best and take care

Nicely written....No life begins with pain and no life ends with happiness...the one who learns to live with both,are tje ones to live peacefully...take care and keep smiling always...

Very deep.. i liked your observation... But life without pain, is not life at all.. without pain, they wouldn't understand the importance of happiness... I'm sure that at the end of the night, the morning will bring bright rays of the sun.. and light up their lives...
Great work.. I loved the way you wrote it... this shows that you have seen what life truly is...
5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

:( loved the moral of this poem and loved the ending too 5/5.......poems that are written so well express a feeling that poets can feel.

:) lots of hugs and kisses.

sonam

Hey :) lovely work! I really loved how you draw away from the normal formatting and wording of poetry. it's unique and I like it! :D and thanks 4 the lovely comment!!! *hugs* ruthie

Amazing poem, great job you keep writing and ill keep reading sarah x

I really loved this poem, the rhyme and flow were excellent and I loved the way you keep the reader guessing as to what precisely you are describing until near the end, great write 5/5

I liked this poem, though a few of the rhymes were a bit off for me. Still the concept of this poem was incredable and one that inspired me to write one of my own. It was just amazing, and really I can't say much else. I will have to show you mine when it's done.
Best of luck to you.

-Tainted Mikochan

Incredable poem I loved it keep writing good luck

Great job!!!

Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

LOVE
Micky

Wow... this is a great poem

This poem is so beautiful beyond words. i am speechleessss dont know what to say... keep writing
:)

Very deep and emotional i like it! please comment on my poems if you get a chance!

Nice. A few things, bcoz is a little informal, perhpas you should update it to because, also;

they try to vommit their heart out of their mouth,

Vomit, has only one m.

However, the flow is excellent, and the rhyming sections work well together. I really enjoyed reading your poem - and the subjectis also intriguing.

Peace. [Sole]

Great flow and very deep powerful content

5/5

Cool...I like it...deep meaning...yet easily understand....

Impressive and on the spot!! especially the title of your poem! 'Unhealed wounds'...