The day i felt death

by ziggyboy900   Mar 29, 2006


Why am i cold
or why am i hot
is it time for me to move on
why do i feel chills coming down my spine
it is not cold outside
its a hot day in the month of may
oh no i think im gonna past out
i roll my eyes and i crash to the ground
im knock out
i open my eyes and realized i was floating in mid-air
i looked down and saw my body laying there
there was a crowd surrounding me on the floor
pharamedics came to pick me and i realized that god has opened his doors
i looked up at the sky and saw my aunt telling me to come inside
i cant i told her not now its early for me to die
god please give me a chance i promise i wont do hurtful thing
please im only seventeen
then out of nowhere in a blink of an eye i came back
the pharamedic asked if i was okay
then i responded im back
and that was the day i felt death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You sound a lot like me.