WHAT YOU MEANT..

by `*`Silently_Hurting`*`   Mar 30, 2006


Do you know the months
That brought me upon my knees,
Begging for something
To set my broken heart to ease..

Do you know how many
Tears that I've cried at night
Hoping to God above
That he would set things right..

Do you realize how much
I miss your Beautiful smile
And those days we talked
Losing track of all time..

Because since your gone
Life to me seems incomplete
The void you've left behind
Now stays with me..

And those words of love
That brought my heart to fly
Is lost back in time
And I've lost my reasons to try..

The emptiness in my world
And all this misery
Made me realize just how much
You meant to me..

PLEASE COMMENT OR VOTE FOR THIS POEM BECAUSE I WANT TO GIVE IT TO THEM AND I NEED TO FIRST SEE WHAT YOU GUYS THINK OF IT BEFORE I DO.. THANK YOU

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  • 16 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hmm.. An intresting read. Ok i liked the first two stanza's, but form these two stanza's and partly stanza three, i felt you were going to use the repition of "Do you know" throughtout each stanza of the poem. But you didnt. This kinda threw me off. That being said, i liked the flow of it. Your rhyme scheme could of had some work though. I liked the emotion this poem shows so well. And the wordsa were quite heartfelt. Especially the end of this poem the emotion was really touching and it was quite sad. The strucutre was ok. I suggest you use more punctuation in your work though. Sorry if my comment seems harsh. Keep writing.. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Erikah

    I think that this is a great poem...You hould give it to him...or whoever it is you're giving it to...I think they'ed REALLY like it.

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