This poem is soo sad... but it is a fantastic write, def 5/5 keep writing and take care Sarah.

That's sweet of u

Aw that is so sad! You did a really good job at expressing your feelings in this poem. I really liked the last stanza, it brought it all together. great job! 5/5*

Do me a favor, alright? Find the lyrics to the song, "Who you'd be today." It's a really sad song about people who leave too early but it has a strong message of: "I'll see you again someday."

The poem was nothing short amazing, honestly. It was very emotional and left me feeling guilty of the times I had fights with people. I hope more people read this, I mean it. It's too good and seems too important to you not to. I'm going to vote as well.

Thnx, but i'm not a beginner
i've been writeing for like a year now
but not everything is perfect
and i like it the way it is, but thnx anyway 4 the suggestion
ur really good 2

Wow. It's crazy to think you are saying I'm such a talented writer when it is you, who is the talented writer!! This put me in tears, seriously it did. This is unbelievably sad and I am so sorry you had to go through this. I cannot imagine losing a friend or family member or anyone close to me. It must be horrible. Handling it well by writing though, because this is an excellent poem. Keep writing, because you are doing an amazing job!!

To be honest i am very weak person by heart and such poems just bring tears. I really fel bad for your cousin and all the family members, any age for suicide is too young but 11 is something so hard to digest, i wonder what point she was trying to prove and look at the cost she paid for it.

Well May God Rest Her Soul In Peace.
U did xpressed ur feelings very nicely here.

All the best and take care of urself

This poem was amazing... i swear it had me crying.. i too lost people so close to me this year... you should keep writing how you feel... 5/5

OMG!!! This made me cry!!! NO JOKE!!! You're so talented!! I'm so sorry this happened to you...it's not right...it's horrible...you have my DEEPEST sympathies...I know how you feel...it's hard to move on...it's so...SO hard!!! But i'm sure that she WANTS you to...she's up in heaven wishing for your best fortunes and she WANTS you to live a long, wonderful life even if she didn't wish to finish hers...it's not your fault so don't ever think it is...You're a victim of circumstance and it's so hard to deal with!! I've been there before!! If you ever need someone to talk to, comment me anytime!!! WONDERFUL poem...you get a 5/5 totally!!! I'm so sorry about your cousin...im so so so sorry!!! Try your best to live your life and keep a smile on your face!!! :)

Some times a featured poem means something in most peoples minds it should because it is under a special catagory ,so with this in mind i will examine it under those intentions and thats what most people do .

Omg... i love it.. the way u wrote it.. its i dont know how to say it !! its that good.. it made me cry.. u have so much talented.. WOW .. it brought back alot of memmories 4 me and i can totaly see where u comming from.. keep it up .. im soo adding u 2 my fav.s!!!

This too had an amazing effect on me. A truly touching yet deeply sad poem. It is a poem to be proud of and it really makes you think...beautifully written....keep writing....

[lost_laureate]

Awwwhhh!!!! I'm so sorry, that was soo sad....but your poem about it was so good..I feel like crying! Awwhh..*sniff.

~~alissa

This is a beautiful Poem i love it!!!!!! i lost a good friend 2 years ago. she was a beautiful person. i miss her so much.
keep writing
love,carg

Wow this is a GREAT poem! you have done really well on this! 11? gah that's really young....i'm sorry bout your loss altho it was a while ago but i couldn't help tell you that you have some talent! comment on mine if you will
thanks
~*~Amber~*~

Wow thats really sad- it very good though. i think your one of the best poets i have seen on this site. 5/5 keep up the great work
-XxLoxX