Wow this is just too deep, really liked it.

all the best and take care

Soo deep....so i love it....its soooo good.....deeply emotional and fantastic

This poem was Amazing! You did an excellent job at capturing the emotions. and i could completely relate to it. Great job! 5/5*

Wow....Thats so sad! It was so good though! Im lost for words. Theres not one thing i would change to this poem, It was just fantastic. The rhyming and flow was perfect, And the wording you used! It all just fitted in nicely. Keep it up! 5/5

luv natalie x-x-x

This is amazing
i like it

Amazing...i love it...flippin awsome!

xXxkattxXx

Fantastic poem. so full of emotion, def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Amazing poem, there was something so different and unique that completely captivated me! Loved it

OMG!!!! okay you dont know how in love i am with this poem. i can relate to every single word in this poem. its like you spoke for me. it is Xcellent. keep it up.

I love your poem, its writen really well and lovely choice of words, god bless you * xxxxx

That was so cute, it remind me of my ex boyfriend!!!!! so deep and emotional

A great, deep and meaningful p0em. i l0ve it! that is exactly the way i feel with my ex, i can relate t0 this p0em s0 much! 5/5! keep up the go0d w0rk
l0ve maddy x0ox

That is truely amazing. Incredibly touching... a true inspiration. Although if these are your feelings, i'm sure you'd rather have them taken away than write a great poem? -take care-

Very powerfully expressive piece of writting. only fault ii found was that the word "your" in line 2 of the 4th stanza should be "you're". other than that there are no faults that i could see. the structure and flow are great and the content amazingly powerfully protryed.

5/5