LoL............. you've written it wonderfully!

purva bhatia

Great poem, nice flow. 5/5

I really like this poem. Great rhyming. 5/5.....keep it up!

This is really good. 5/5*

Different. Never read one where a person was actually described like a computer. I think it flowed well. Organization was great. Topic: Unique.
Makes me want to read some more of yours.

Lol, this was a really creative poem. I have never seen anyone write about computers and people and then combining them. Wow, that was just cool. Nice job!

That was....WOW.....I love how you described yourself to a computer. Kind of strange, but excellent. It fit together so beautifully. I love it. I think this is the best one I have read in a while!

>black&&blue

Wow very very good ! I lvoe it.. alot 10/5 lol

great write

God Bless

-Chris

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!! Wow that was so freakin creative! The meaning of it was awesome, and just the way u set up everything, and kept it flowing, perfect! AWESOME JOB! the only problem I have is it doesnt have any periods or commas... but thats just w/e... doesnt take away from this poem, cause its awesome! total 5/5!=D I couldnt tell u what to change cause it seems perfect... great job!

~+Megan+~

Loved the imagery in this. Perfect theme for todays cyber world.

This is a super kool poem, you did a great job with the rhyming and the flow and the topic you decided to do it on is very different. I really liked it, Good Job and keep it up! :) 5/5

Wow that was really cool i like how you wrote it. that was really good idea lol. keep up the good work 5.5

Wow... I really loved this...It really explains the world today...Wow, amazing job is all I have to say. Excellent.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Woah!!! Thats excellent! The topic is so different and the computer talk is clever. A really great write. The flow was excllent the whole way through and the ending was strong. Keep up the great work. I'll read more.. you're very talented. =] 5/5

I think this poem is brilliant twisted wording.
I am in awe of your talent.
..xx

I don't no that much about computers but i understood that poem and it was great 5/5 very good

This is both funny and poignant......a sad comedy routine....well-written............