Dark Dark Dark

by Kylead   Apr 3, 2006


In the darkest place
The Clock Strikes 1 am
And so begins the darkest hour
Cold and dark all alone no person no sound no place nobody around
I am the only thing lost in this place never to be found.
There are no lights to be found where I stay.
The surface is foreign and all the lands are barren
The skies painted a solid black
Now the Clock strikes 2 am
And I remain in the same spot and in the same place.
With nobody around
With sound of my breath the only sound to sooth me
Pretty soon I start counting breathes still I fall asleep
When I awake the Clock strikes 10 pm
Still dark I go back to Sleep

I find this kinda boring myself tell me what you think

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Not boring as such, defantly hold attention though there is not a great deal of interest attention is still held well thoughout. it seems pritty original in both form and content too, anfd the flow is smooth and consistant though the peice.