BEsides a few minor spelling typos, I really liked this one because society tends to always stereotype us. I like your word choice very much and the way it's organized. It definately paints a picture.

Great poem. it gets to the point really well. my friends are skaters so i kinda know what your on about!!
love jess XxXx

Huh a liked this poem alot its got that kinda simplicity to it that also give a strong message im with ya on the whole discrimination for skateboarders and adolescents it sucks majorly but an excellent poem :)
~jacob

Very interesting quite good structure....it was a very okay poem...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I like it it proves you got heart to do what you do no matter what people say and one day you\'ll be on t.v so tell everyone to go **** themselfs

Thats definatlry the truth...this poem made me smile.

Once again a well structured poem with a thoughtful messgae. keep it up

This really made me smile!!
states the truth
KEEP ON SKATING
xxxx

Good job, I'm not a skater but I get what you mean, I dont like the whole stereotype thing either. I really dont know why but I wanted to say that its really cool that you live for Jesus, I do to and I dont meet many ppl like that on this site so yeah...again great job keep it up& Godbless,
erica

It seems from ur witing that u care a lot about rythm & sorry it seems that what ur writing is not relatd that much...
thats why ur better at writing lyrics....
sorry again but i think thats why new songs have no meaning

Good poem. It's great that you have such a passion for skating. I hate when people judge. I really enjoyed reading this because i can relate. Keep writing.