Moon (Haiku)

by Matt Fleckney   Apr 5, 2006


If the moon fell down
upon the earth and lay still
would we call it God?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    We would call it a God-dess, lol..... Wonderful Haiku, Matt....

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Very unique... I like the question, how philosophical!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Awesome haiku! I've never seen one written like this. Excellent choice of words, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Hey Matt ^_^ I read all the Haikus but instead of commenting individually I decided to leave an all-inclusive comment. lol I must say I really enjoyed them all. I love how you pose such thoughtful questions in this form. Short and simple but speaking volumes, wonderful writing.
    ~Keep smiling, Keep writing
    Kim