A lovely thorn

by rachel harris   Apr 5, 2006


The lovely thorn pierced my skin
blood dripped
and leaked into a tin
my skin finally ripped

blood dripped
the thorn fell to the ground
my skin finally ripped
and the rose was just found

the thorn fell to the ground
the decaying rose has lost its thorn
and the rose was just found
the bloody thorn cannot be reborn

the decaying rose has lost its thorn
and leaked into a tin
the bloody thorn cannot be reborn
the lovely thorn pierced my skin

PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT!! IT WOULD MEAN SO SO SO MUCH TO ME!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    It was good. but you need to put in comas or periods, so the reader knows when to pause.
    I was really deep, and I love the imagery.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    Keep it up. 5/5 without a doubt in my mind. flows amazingly well.

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