Thats good! better than mine atleast drop me a comment if you have time!

Thanks for the comment, glad its blunt. whomever said poems had to be precise in rhyme & line was incorrect, don't believe all you hear, you're young so I understand you're misconception..

my poem was a mere metaphor...

And your poem is simply cliche, m' dear. Your rhymes are typical & the idea is simple. Try going outside the box. Really feel it.

But for being 12 years old, that was an awesome job. You have definate potential.

Wow, thanks

It's good! thanks for commenting on mine! :)

~*~*~Jenna Leigh~*~*~

Oh, ok. I hope you enjoyed your time on pome&quotes

Short, simple yet meaningful. Good job. And thanks for your comment on mine.

Aww. hmm. maybe add a reason? do you have a reason to why your sad? if you do write it. good start though!!

No, I thought I mentioned that I didn't know why...oh well. I think it is the thought that run through my head. When I am alone I start thinking really horrid thoughts. Stuff like 'What if mom doesn't love me anymore?' then I start crying. Imagine how ones life would be if they didn't get love from their parents!

About the pig on good for u i dont have cookies to give u

Lol

It was dark... I think you got your mood across well. The only suggestions I would have is perhaps improve the flow?

"I do wonder why
My depression IS so sad"

That adds a little flow...

And i think you mean "accept"...

Frankly, I liked it. Short, but powerful... that's a good poem. Good.

Car

Thanks

I lik its kinda short but if u not done its a pretty gd peom and ya i kno tht depression can be very confuzin i mean i dont even kno why im sad half the time lol oh and thanks for commenting me ^_^

Thank you! It's good to know someone out there know's how I feel. By the way, excellent poem. 5/5