Comments : Sweet Amy Cried

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    AW that poem was so sad. I loved it. You are very talented. keep up the good work. 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    I liked this second part to your uh series i suppose is what it is? this poem is at least as good as the first part if not better and everythign a good poem should. It tells a story and pushes emotion with great strength, it has an excellent (albeit complex) rhyme scheme and has excellent flow all in all an amazing peice :)
    ~jacob

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Wow..that is a sad poem and truly beautiful. 5.5

    thanks for sharing
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Again, it is really brilliant, but for me each part can't really stand on it's own, that is the one thing I don't know if I really love. It is a nice idea and I will be certain to read part three. I did like it how you changed where the poem was, because there isn't one set of emotions, one tone alone that can be used to describe an entire life of a person, so nice job with that.

    -Tainted

  • 17 years ago

    by SexyGirl101akaJess

    I Love It 5/5