I'll never let go

Very different the repetition really intesified how much you didnt want to let go it tied the poem in well together...but I think it could be made better if you added more substance...it was so beautiful I found myself wispering it...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Sweet . . . so cute! I too enjoyed the style of the poem - normally ones like that rhyme, but in this case it stands out . . individual - I enjoyed it.

Peace. [Sole]

Very different style of writing...i like it. :)

Heeeeeeeeeeeey.

This twas excellent, very cute again.
&& sweet, and you described your feelings well.

ttyl.x

This a very very very touching poem I was like aww... (I know it sounds to girly) but I really loved it keep it up!^_^