Love by the beach

by angie A   Apr 9, 2006


* i know it does not rhyme though most of my poems do. give me a break, I'm trying something new
please enjoy,
~Angie A

the tainted water splashes upon our skins
as the sand is our only haven
a picture is formed of a sunset
pastels with desires of it's red,
and the humbleness of it's orange too
the only sounds of our heartbeat is are only hue.
the sound effects of the beach surround us like the water splashing into the tide
i seize you are upon my wholesome body
it's all romantic, i tend to see,
love by the beach
so secluded just you and me

*to be continued

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    This is a very good poem..it rhymes i some ways...a poem is not judged i believe on rhyme...it's judged on feeling and you have a lot of that in this poem...very good :) 5/5 rating