Def a 5 vote, This poem was fantastically written, I have added you to my fav's so keep writing so I can keep reading sarah x

Really well written - There was a great flow, except in the third stanza - the first line is slightly off, but it doesn't really do any hamr to the rest of the poem. Great work.

Peace. [Sole]

I agree with you 100% there are other ways than cutting yourself and killing yourself...I like how you are getting the message across..maybe i should read this to my friend..

You write poems from a total different point of view!! I think thats what makes you such an unique writer!!! I really love your work!!! I wish i can write
like you one day!! Thanx for entering my contest!!! Well Done!! 5/5

The strongest people,
are the ones who survive.
They fight to the end,
just to say they're alive.

that part really clicked with me. its amazing. and really touches me. aweseom poem

Again your last stabzas really sum the poem up and are amazingly good!!!
5/5 to the maxxxxxx

That was a very touching poem! Very good! I just love all of you poems! 5/5!

It seems to be missing something...when i read most of your poems they are more then just words.
4/5
~Wings