Aw this poem is so sad. It's really deep & sends a very powerful message. 5/5*

Wow, Thats really sad. Its kinda how i feel about my mum, Somehow im just never good enough for her. Anywho, This was really good! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

I really like it. I can relate. Fathers pretty much suck. Keep writing!

I was wondering why the rhyming was a little off when all your other stuff is just perfect. Sweet poem, although very sad. I got lucky, my dad quite all his adictoins before I could remember them. Your skill was incrediable when you were younger.

Again, wow.
You could see your talent at a young age and you have improved greatly.
But this actually brought me to tears. I was reading it and it saddened me to think of your age when you wrote this.

It was graet for your age at the time and the emotion in it was outstanding. It showed how children tend to blame themselves for their parenst mistakes..

Your flow was good even then and I really enjoyed reading this.

Well done.x

Wow this is excellent! Outstanding poem for the young age you wrote it at. Reminds me of myself at times, and the drunk uncle who used to babysit me...I understand where your pain was from at the time, and it's like you tend to say sorry even when you did nothing but just because you felt guilty, and like everything was your fault. I know because it was experiences like these that changed my life forever. Keep it up! xxx

Whoa... in the back of a bible... this is so good, though. Maybe you should put all of your work in a book and sell it. I'd buy it!

That is a really good poem. Good job!

This is beautiful.. and for u to have written this wen u wer only 9.. i mean, i dont think i even knew wat poetry or rhyme was back then.. hehe.. love the rhyme and the flow.. words are reli emotional..its sad, but ilove it.. i kinda got that same impression wen i read it .. like OMG.. funny where u find hidden things.. i take it from ur words that ur OK with ur dad now?? hope so.. i agree with ur words: time does change ur view of any1 and anything..
keep going
take care
NannO

Wow, this reminds me a bit of a friend I have, you were a good writer even at 11, it's a shame you had to feel that way to wrote it
Shows fear and nervouness
Very good :) but sad :(

Ahhh this is sad!!! sorry. good poem. 5/5

Aww. that is so good. you made it seem like the reader is the kid, with an innocent mind not quite sure what will happen next.. that is truly something to look at.. thank you for commenting my poems I added you to my favs as well

Aw.. sad but good poem

You were an excellent writer at eleven too. I know this poem wasn't on your list, but I had to read it(= Another Excellent one, Master of Shadow.

Wow, you were only 11? hats off to you.. nice work

Wow, this is such a sad piece quite emotional to I'd think to write...I think you done a fantastic job even if you were so young......very talented in describing emotions.

I very good poem for a nine year old, shoot i couldnt even read :( sucks for me. lol

Wow, for you bieng about 11 when you wrote that, it's very very good I really liked it. And it's kinda sad. But none-the-less. I liked it.