Crashing

I try to breath, yet no air
escapes my lungs; thoughts
that I conceive, who have I
become?

A useless piece of shit and
no one seems to care; my
soul is bleeding with emotions,
yet nothing is inside there.

Falling to the ground my
world comes crashing;
shatters like glass, and
my whole life's passing.

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* not so great.