Comments : Never Be Together((ACROSTIC))

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great poem keep it up
    when u get the chance, check out my poem IMPULSE

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I like it! you're really talented to come out woth this at your first try!

    well done!

    lonelynow xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    This was a really freat poem especially for your first time! You have talent w/o adoubt! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted~transistor

    For the first time writing a poem like this, its amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    This is a really good poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by {get*lost}

    For a first time acrostic poem it was really good! i havnt written any poems like this but you kind of inspired me to try lol thanks xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Delie

    Good job! keep it up! ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    This was really great! the emotion was amazing and ive felt this way b4...i still feel this way....but anyways grrt poem...
    love ya lts,
    sore

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenSoul

    Omg thats so neat..
    I haven't really seen an acrostic poem before, but that was really good..
    I could never think of that Well Done!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    For your first acrostic this is really well done. the rhyme is perfect. you are a very good writer.

    xo kisses xo

  • 16 years ago

    by coupon can

    This is REALLY good for ur first time. like woah good. i've never actually done one because i suck at them. but ur like reaaaaallly good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good acrostic poem, the rhyming words in this poem is kinda 'force' well it's your 1st acrostic poem anyway.. So well done! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    This is soo good
    i love acrostic poems
    (=
    i can relate alot
    very good kepp it up