Great poem keep it up
when u get the chance, check out my poem IMPULSE

I like it! you're really talented to come out woth this at your first try!

well done!

lonelynow xxxx

This was a really freat poem especially for your first time! You have talent w/o adoubt! ^_^

For the first time writing a poem like this, its amazing

This is a really good poem! 5/5

For a first time acrostic poem it was really good! i havnt written any poems like this but you kind of inspired me to try lol thanks xoxo

Good job! keep it up! ^^

This was really great! the emotion was amazing and ive felt this way b4...i still feel this way....but anyways grrt poem...
love ya lts,
sore

Omg thats so neat..
I haven't really seen an acrostic poem before, but that was really good..
I could never think of that Well Done!!
5/5

For your first acrostic this is really well done. the rhyme is perfect. you are a very good writer.

xo kisses xo

This is REALLY good for ur first time. like woah good. i've never actually done one because i suck at them. but ur like reaaaaallly good.

It was a good acrostic poem, the rhyming words in this poem is kinda 'force' well it's your 1st acrostic poem anyway.. So well done! Keep writing!

This is soo good
i love acrostic poems
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i can relate alot
very good kepp it up