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by stephenie Apr 15, 2006 category : Life, society / other
If I could hear depression It would sound like fifty flying scratching snatching salamanders If I could see depression It would look like a deep dark scary sewering silo If I could taste depression It would taste like sour scrambled eggs soaked in steaming sweat If I would smell depression It would be the aroma of a dead decaying body If I could touch depression It would feel like a lonely dark swimming sea
by stephenie
Thank you i had to write it for school
by Christine
Nice use of alliteration it makes the poem really catchy and I like your comparisons to what depression would be like if it were an object. An interesting perception, well done!
