The day i cried

U have a lot of talent ur writing has a lot of deep emotions in it...mayb u shud read some of mine they are not the best but they are kind of like this...if u ever need to talk i am here...nice job on this one 5/5

Sweetie.

Their all so sad! *gets out tissues* but Adels got a point a peom with no heart is just words. pour yourself into your work and it comes out liek a bizillion times better! lol

*how adel really likes commas....*

Anywho back on topic of....or right poem! lol its sweet to write about this girl and what happened but ... maybe branch out a bit, explore the writing world a bit =) but if your happy keep it the way it is! lol well done no matter what!

< 3 Jenn

Ps: Check your email =) my random commentary will be there... maybe a bit more understandable.... right yess... this is darling out x0x

Wow there is so much pain behind this poem. i really like the verse
this is to the girl
who made me bleed
my suicide notes
she now has to read
..it just shows that what goes around comes around..she put u in pain n now she can suffer. great job, keep it up!