O baba i love that poem!

but y r u so sad ?!? can you write a happy poem for me just 1 time pleeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee i mean you seem so upset and depressed when you write. i understand that you are being creative but i mean where is the spark huh?..........

well i will write a happy poem if you do too

ok

starting.......................not yet..........not yet............not ...........NOW~!~

LUVS YA MUCH

DIVA

Good rhythm and flow to this poem, uv confused your and you're in some places though. xx

This Is Such A Great Poem...It's Like Your Looking For Your Smile...I Love This Piece Of Writting That Your Did...Your Choice Of Words Is So Fascinating! Keep It Up...
Take Care...
With Love,
Piink :)

David... it's so sad!! omgoodness thats so amazing though. I love your poetry... dont ever stop k? or else... hehe!

Love Always
~Casey J