Hi, i think ur poem is really good- and i can really relate to it-

It wqs great and i could relate..it was however, hard to read..the parts u wanted read together or to rhyme or flow were hard to catch..try breaking it up into ceertain stanzas or something..i had to reread to get the feeling cuz i was so busy trying to read it properly...great job tho and i like the plot...thx for ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

Another amazing poem. this poem i can really relate too. when i read it i could tell how much pain emotionally you were in. i can relate.keep it up

Very amazing...and i can feel the emotion w/ this poem at the same time i can truly relate it 5/5

god bless...

This is another meaningful poem by you, very good job done. 5/5

Your poem sounds like something that could be used as spoken word at a poetry slam or something to that nature. I really liked it, keep up the great work! :)

Another great poem.

<3Amber

I liked this. but it seemed kinda confusing cause the words was pushed together to much.. i rate this a 4