Wow, This was sooo good!! It was a great emotion, && I loved the way you worded it! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

Wow, This was sooo good!! It had a great deal of emotion, && I loved the way you worded it! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

Lol........... Sorry about the first comment, I kinda mucked up what I was saying... Sorry lol

Great imagery of the rain as the sins - rain never ends of course, forever and always caught in the eternal water cycle. Very well written.

Peace. [Sole]

Well i like this the most out of what i read from you. in my opinion this is your best work anyhow if its possible try to top this poem i read your lastest too this is better

This is still you best poem
bt anyhow this inspired me to write something along the same stucture as this poem tell me what u think of my newest idea kinda got it from ya

Thanx for the inspiration

Fixed the error thanx

WoW. this piece is brilliant. the way you eloquently compare black rain and human sin is amazing.
thanks for complimenting on my piece (although it is nothign compared to this.)

Such a truthful poem, once again. Not only that, you hit me with another wonderful closing line, you're very talented for doing that. You're such a great writer, never quit.

Woh! this was awesome! I loved the way it was written and how you compared our sins to the black rain! Really cool! And the imagry as well!
^_^ -cheers-

I am amazed. It has such a calm flow and it's also very powerful. It's one of the best I have read here.

marcella

Omg I LOVE your poetry its really good.

Really great work on this one!!! keep it up!!

Another fantastic write, the language and imagery used here works very well and paints a graphic picture in my head of things coming to an end. I love when a poem can do that. Thought-provoking stuff 5/5

Like the dark side of this poem, it reminds me of something, but I can't recall what.. but anyway, Thank you for commenting on my poem, I always like hearing what other people think about my poems, advice is always welcome, =) x

Amazing poem! I really enjoyed reading this. The title is very creative and really caught my eye. You did a great job on this. I love the way that you described everything. The black rain being our sins.. very imaginative. Great job on this!

I love this poem. The flow and wording is wonderful.
I really lover this part "To gather in hoards,
As the sky turns to black
The red lightning shall flash"
It was just amazing, as if I was there or something.
Great Write!

This poem gave me chills at the end. great job! 5/5