Well written peice, didn't quite understand it at the begining but it becomes much clearer as you read though. it is well written with a smooth flow, and the questions really add to the peices depth and expressions.

5/5

Wow, what an amazing poem. Thumbs up!

Excellent poem, the sketchy way it begins kind of illustrates your uncertainty, if that makes sense. Fantastic read 5/5

Maybe you could try forcing the rhyme a bit less in some places and focus on your fluency more. I am not insulting you. You see to have the rhyme pattern down, but it feels like you need to have your poem rhyme takes away from the diction and flow that could really help you create and shape this poem. It has a good message, I don't know, I guess I think you have the ability to really give it a life of its own, and I was sad that I didn't feel that as much with this poem.

-Tainted

Nice poem, keep the great job up/ 5/5

This was a great poem! i didnt really understand it at first but i do now.. its really good.

Not the best of your poems. I saw some repetition in there and again the need for more commas, but it was a decent read still. Keep it up.

That was pretty good.
Just a little too forced.