A great poem once again! It's exactly how someone would be feeling and is one of those things that just happens in life. Keep it up!!

Wow thats really good and how i feel about some of my friends
~courtney~

Good idea behind this.
I didn't like the flow as much, sorry.

"I would not ask you,
Why have you done that?
We were so close,
I trusted you a lot."
just seemed off for some reason.
maybe it was the rhyming.
but other than that, good job

Wow... u are a certified poetry writers for me i think.. will i really like your poems to much impressive.

Awwwww.....That was so sweet, but sad.
I really enjoyed reading it. I think your
a lot like me when it comes to poetry.
You just let nature take its course. Am
I right? I really love reading what you
write and I truley do hope that there is
more to come.
Keep up the excellent work. (expert)lol

Love ya
Letty

Wow, I loved this. It describes true feelings that are so real everywhere and especially for me, I can relate to it a lot. Great write. Honestly, I feel so tied to your situation, it was too powerful to me. Keep up your excellent work as always.

Beautiful

My best friend ditched my one of my best friends so this poem has meaning
love it as always!

Really nice poem!!
love it,

YOU GOT A LOT OF COMMENTS BUT THiS POEM iS REALLY GOOD! KEEP iT UP!

-SHELBY-

Oh i now how you feel there i had to go thought the same thing. i love the poem

I loved it. IT really had a lot of emotion and i like it because it is true for alot of people. well i gave you a 5/5

AWWW. sad and sweet poem which i really enjoyed reading. well done

Aww that's sad...I lost a bunch of my friends when I started to hang with a different crowd. we still kinda keep in touch, but we all have different things to do... ღ*CiaO*ღ

Awww thats sooo sad...i hope your friend reads this and is ashamed! Loved the ending..the whole piece flowed soo well.Keep it up!
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*-Tormented

Ah sad! but this was really good.
good job

This is a beautifully penned poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for commenting on my poem.

~Arsalan D.

I need something like this as my friendship with the best firend I could ever have as just ended over a boy. Basically she got jealous blah blah blah.

Oh well. It is a truly amazing poem, 5/5.

Love Emma xxx

I relly love your poems i think there good 5/5

Sad...and a neat perspective on it. Jpoet*