Great work on this, Joe!

Thanks for participating in the challenge!

Adorable poem.. 5/5

Wow Joe, this is a amazing poem just like others of yours. You are a very talented young man. Keep writing hun.

BTW:I'm sorry that I havent been on to talk to you lately. My new job is crazy and when I come on here your not on.

Hope nothing has changed between you and me. I love you so much hun

*julie*xox

Great job i can epathise with this poem which helps to involve the audience.
The only critisism i could find which is not very big is that the rythm is a bit stilted at the begining which hardly effects the poem due to the fact it is written with a free ryhming structure.
Great job 5/5
Aaron (remo)