My Bleeding Heart (Monotetra)

by Simon Hayes   Apr 24, 2006


I look out of the window pane
Watch every droplet of the rain
As each one falls onto the lane
I feel my pain, I feel my pain

Soon a bright rainbow fills the sky
The sun comes out, the rain does dry
The sky goes blue like mid July
Clouds say goodbye, clouds say goodbye

But as the rain and sun do part
It always rains inside my heart
The day your love had to depart
My bleeding heart, my bleeding heart

Come back to me my swooping dove
Fly down to me from high above
I long to see a life filled of
Eternal love, Eternal love

© Simon Hayes 24/04/06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really liked this poem. It was a beautiful write. I loved the line about the swooping dove. So glad that you could share that with us....(btw-you're on my favorites, :)! Keep it up!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Simon,

    TYou did such an excellent job of filling your words and emotion into the Monotetra form. Wonderfully written, kudos!

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    This is one of my favourite poems ever! The absolute beauty of this was maginfied by the form, such excellent penmenship. I was completely wrapped up in it from first word to last. An outstanding piece of poetry if I've ever seen one!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Amazing. I reallylike tis type of poetry style. This was such a beautiful write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think you did a beautiful job, expecially with the words you chose for the repetition.

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