Nice words

by Renata   Apr 25, 2006


What you are saying?
Are not you just playing
With my feelings for you?
Or may be I am playing too?
Your words are so nice
Furthermore, they are so wise.
But you were lying
And now I am dying...

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  • 19 years ago

    by White Blizzard

    You poetry breathes, do not suffercate it. feel the words from your heart. Let them flow through your deep mind to the blank page and turn the page into a sea of understanding. : )

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I like the way it was written..the flow was nice...but the second sentence flows akward...and the whole outlook of the poem confused me...but other than that it was perfect...

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