I always have liked love poems... This one just happens to be really good. I love the last part. I believe once you love someone they will be a part of you forever. Nice poem. 5/5

~Shae

Such a heartfelt poem! I love your words! You expressed yourself very well! Even though there weren't any rhyme scheme to this, I thought it was very well-written! Great job! =)
5/5

A free-verse poem with emotion and deep powerful imagery, WOW! I can never get that into my free-verse poems.
But anyway, you are really talented, this was very well written, flowed somewhat okay.
Keep writing
xxxxxx

So sad, yet so wonderfully written and such a pleasure to read.
There was so much emotion packed into this, and the words brought tears to my eyes.
A wonderful write.

Very cute poem.. im such a suker for love poems.. i like this poem a lot.. but some lines seem too long for the poem

Wow. that was an great poem! so full of emotion, I really enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work! :] 5/5

It was overall a really good poem. Very romantic and realatible. 5/5

marcella

Luved it

Wow great poem
many people would like this, cuz they can kinda relate to this in one way or another...
you did a great job!

I love your style! i really liked this because unlike your other one I read (desires) it's much more simply written considering the vocabulary yet it doesn't lose its impact and is still poetically beautiful. i can actually relate to this a lot with something going on in my life (but on the other side...this is really unneccessary to mention but I talk alot.) and this line,
"And that you believe being loved is better then to love,"
really caused me to think. I did think though that this line,
"You know deep inside that I agreed to step back our relationship,"
could have been worded a bit better. It's a little too blunt to me.

Overall though another excellent read

Sweet...

it all didnt flow right...

but i can relate to it alot

Wow... very passionate, I loved the topic you chose to write about, and the heartfelt aspect of it... Absolutely fabulous.

Wow sometimes true feelings are the hardest ones to get down on paper because those are the ones that we hide from our peers and the rest of the world, even ourselves sometimes. But you managed to share all of these feelings very well. I liked it cause it was a love poem yet it was also kind of sad, I think that you should get rid of all of the I's and the You's and this poem would be much better.

Wow, this is really a sad poem...
beautifully written though...
5/5
*isabel*

I sort of dont get..so did he cheat? srry im trying to get it but dont...mayb u can explain it to me so i can get a clear picture...but just cant rate until u explain..im so srry