by prilleliciouz Apr 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Every night i stay awake praying that you'd always stay. Knowing that everything will be alright, but i was wondering why i was crying that night. I wondered why I wasn't feeling the way i do, I guess it's because i was thinking bout you. Hoping that you will visit me soon, when i look outside i look for the moon. Now that you are gone I know that you are still here, But in my dreams I hoped that you'd appear. knowing that God has you in his arms in paradise. I want to let you know that we all have you in our hearts deep inside.. we miss you dearly Bu we want you to know, That even pain will stay in our hearts we have to let you go.. WE MISS YOU |
by ~*Nicki*~
This is pretty good. I love how you have so much emotion. I lost someone recentley to suicide. |
Excellent poem, I really like it. It's way meaningful! One that thing that would help your poetry look better is writing it in poetry form and use correct grammer. Other than that, it's great! =) |